Wording of Schelter note



I find the revised form definitely preferable, but is it absolutely 
essential for such a message to be displayed automatically each and every
time that one opens Maxima?  It would seem appropriate for such 
information, and other, to be available from a menu 'Help' or 'About 
Maxima'.
      I have modified slightly the grammar and composition in the two
paragraphs below.
      J. F. Ogilvie 
On Fri, 14 Dec 2007, Stavros Macrakis wrote:

> A relatively minor thing, but something that annoys me every time I read
> it.  I think some of our intro text could be improved.  Currently, it reads
> (in part):
>
> Maxima is ...
>
> e.g.:
>
  Maxima is an open-source release of Macsyma, a computer program for algebra
  developed at Massachusetts Institute of Technology during 1967 - 1982.
  Macsyma inspired other systems, including Maple and Mathematica,
  which retain a strong resemblance. Maxima is a publicly available
  descendent of Macsyma, with an active user community that continues
  to maintain and to extend it.

  William Schelter<http://www.utexas.edu/faculty/council/2004-2005/
  memorials/schelter/schelter.html> maintained Maxima from
  1982 until his death in 2001. In 1998, he obtained permission to
  release the source code under the GNU General Public License (GPL). We
  are grateful for his work, which made the survival of Maxima possible.