Hi,
Before I translate the document intromax.ltx, I tried to read carefully and
run the examples one by one.
After that, I have several comments as below:
1. The current intromax.ltx line 82: ^C is missing.
2. The current intromax.ltx line 107 : It looks like that there is a typo.
my Maxima -> by Maxima
3. The current intromax.ltx line 681 : It looks like that there is a typo.
indefinite -> definite
4. The current intromax.ltx line 131 : As for me, the abbreviation "E.g." is
not very obviously parenthetic. How about just "For example,"?
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5. I ran the examples, and the printouts are a little different from the
current document in some cases.
I have a revised document with all the updates above; if anybody disagrees
on the above updates, then let me know.
Probably, I'll send the updated document to Jaime Villate if he doesn't
mind.
Another thing is that, I would like to get some advices to set the
priorities to translate the documents that are already posted.
Would you give me some advice?
Thanks in advance,
Sajang